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Asking for advice from psychologist.

Asking for advice from psychologist. NrEVW
Dear Madam, I would be extremely grateful if you could offer your advice on teaching with pupils who are bad-behavied in their family. My full name is Khurshida Mamasodikova, presently working at school as an English teacher. I am a newer teacher and I have problems with my character. Because of my politeness, sometimes I can not manage my audience. What can I do? Should I be more strict for them? How can I encourage my pupils who has got some problems in their family and does not interested in learning English well. What methods do you offer me to stimulate my passive students psychologically? What kind of useful suggestions could I give their parents? Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. I understand that you are a busy person and any advice you offer would be greatly appreciated. My contact details can be found at the endi of this letter. I look forward to receiving your advice. Yours faithfully, Khurshida Mamasodikova.
Dear Madam, I would be
extremely
grateful if you could offer your advice on teaching with pupils who are
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in their family. My full name is
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Khurshida
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sometimes
I can not manage my audience. What can I do? Should I be more strict for them? How can I encourage my pupils who
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problems in their family and does not
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interested
in learning English well. What methods do you offer me to stimulate my passive students
psychologically
? What kind of useful suggestions could I give their parents? Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. I understand that you are a busy person and any advice you offer would be
greatly
appreciated. My contact
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details
can
be found
at the
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of this letter. I look forward to receiving your advice. Yours
faithfully
,
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Khurshida
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Mamasodikova
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IELTS letter Asking for advice from psychologist.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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