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Formal invitation letter about training event

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Dear Mr Tolbin. I am writing to tell you about training event. I am organizing it for morning of Tuesday February 7th. The seminar will be on issue about using new medical tools at work. Number of our staffs have not been using orderly in our renewed hospital since which were brought with a new fashion shape. My manager believes that according to this issue, lot of employees could not understand How using instruction of those instruments. All information is given in German language. Consequently they think that more training is needed. As experienced German expert we know you and you got many certificates at plenty of places. I would be greatful If you would be prepared to share a number of this knowledge and make a presentation during the seminar. I suggest that it should last for around 45 minutes. I would like you to talk about subjects which is manual handing. Back defects are most common security matter so need a particular focus. A practical session where people can practice good lifting techniques would be ideal. If you are able to do this please let me know What resource you need so that I can provide them for you. I look forward to receiving your reply. Yours sincerely Alice Rossetti.

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