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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, qlmr
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to draw your attention about my lost bag. Last week, I was on a flight to London where I left my bag. Unfornutately, I did not realize about it until I arrived at Hotel. If I recall, I was in the second coach of Business Class. In addition to the bag, it is a brown color made of leather has Michael Cors engraved on it. It is an pretty expensive bag. This is a very special bag as my best friend gifted me on my 50th Birthday. Moreover, all my belongings are in there as well, for instance, Credit Cards, Driver's Licence Card and work realted documents. I would really appreciate if you can look for this above described bag. I can be always contacted at 647 456 7890. I can reach there at your earliest convenince. Thank you.
Dear Sir,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to draw your attention about my lost
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bag
. Last week, I was on a flight to London where I
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my
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bag
.
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Unfornutately
, I did not realize about it until I arrived at Hotel. If I recall, I was in the second coach of Business
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Class
.

In addition
to the
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bag
, it is a brown color made of leather has Michael
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Cors
engraved on it. It is
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an
pretty expensive
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bag
. This is a
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very
special
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bag
as my best friend gifted me on my 50th Birthday.
Moreover
, all my belongings are in there
as well
,
for instance
, Credit Cards, Driver's
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Licence
Card and work
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realted
documents.

I would
really
appreciate if you can look for this above
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described
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bag
. I can be always contacted at 647 456 7890.
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I
can reach there at your earliest
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convenince
.

Thank you.
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IELTS letter Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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151 words
6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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