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you have lost your credit card. write a letter to your bank manager.

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Dear Manager, I am Miral Jalu, your potential credit card customer for the past 2 years. I am writing this letter to inform you about the loss of my credit card yesterday and requesting you to block my old credit card as soon as possible. I came yesterday from my trip to Pune and during the travelling I somewhere lost my credit card and have no idea about where I've lost it. So, I request you to block the current credit card having number XXXX XXXX XXXX, named Miral Jalu and issue a new one as replacement. Also, I am enclosing the required details for your onward actions. Expecting a prompt action with this regards. Thanking you, Your's Faithfully, Miral Jalu
Dear Manager, I am
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Miral
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, your potential
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credit
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customer for the past 2 years. I am writing this letter to inform you about the loss of my
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credit
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card
yesterday and requesting you to block my
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old
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credit
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as
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as possible. I came yesterday from my trip to Pune and during the travelling I somewhere lost my
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credit
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card
and have no
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idea
about where I've lost it.
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, I request you to block the
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current
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having number XXXX
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XXXX XXXX
, named
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Miral
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Jalu
and issue a new one as replacement.
Also
, I am enclosing the required
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details
for your onward actions. Expecting a prompt action with
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regards. Thanking you,
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Your's
Faithfully
,
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Jalu

IELTS letter you have lost your credit card. write a letter to your bank manager.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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