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Write a complain letter to the hotel manager which you stayed there .

Write a complain letter to the hotel manager which you stayed there. yGrJE

Dear sir / madam We are writing to complain about your hotel where we spend our winter vocation last month. To begin with, in your brochure you mentioned that all the apartments had bath, however, the problem was that there was not hot water. So we had to use cold water for washing in so chilly winter days. Moreover, the brochure claimed that there was a skiing pitch near the hotel, but the skiing pitch was thirty minutes away by car. Last not but least, it was mentioned that the hotel has a perfect serving staff, however, the service was awful, especially, the service of the restaurant. The meal was not hot and fresh. We think it is clear that your brochure was misleading. As a result, we would like a partial refund because this was the worst holiday that we had ever had. We look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours faithfully,

Dear sir / madam

We are writing to complain about your hotel where we spend our winter vocation ‘last month’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last month
.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in your brochure you mentioned that all the apartments had bath, however
, the problem was that there was not hot water. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 we had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water for washing in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 chilly winter days. Moreover
, the brochure claimed that there was a skiing pitch near the hotel, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the skiing pitch was thirty minutes away by car. Last not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 least, it was mentioned
 that the hotel has a perfect serving staff, however
, the service was awful, especially
, the service of the restaurant. The meal was not hot and fresh.

We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that your brochure was misleading. As a result
, we would like a partial refund This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this was the worst holiday that we had ever had.

We look forward to receiving a prompt reply.

Yours faithfully
, 