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you want to ask a friend who live there to help to find a past-time job

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Dear Prim, How are you, I hope you are fine. I have a good news to tell you. Now, I am going to study at Los angles University, USA, which is the same as yours, in next two months. I will stay in USA for three years, I would like to do a part-time job while I am studying. a month ago, I have the test for get scholarship. Unfortunately, I can not got that, So I must pay for my spending by myself. Moreover, Education fee in USA is very expensive, also living expenses. Thus, I would like to do some part-time job, while I studying. As the result, could you recommend me about find the part-time job, I ever hear that you had been done it. Or I am not sure if you could help me to find it. Please contact me back. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Love and miss you so much, Cheese W

Dear Prim,

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good
 news to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I am going to study at Los angles University, USA, which is the same as yours, in next
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in USA
 for three years, I would like to do a part-time job while I am studying.

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a
 month ago, I have the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
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get
 scholarship. Unfortunately, I can not The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "get"get
got
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So
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must
 pay for my spending by myself. Moreover
, Education fee A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".in the USA
in USA
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very
 expensive, also
 living expenses. Thus
, I would like to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 part-time job, while Did you mean "I'm studying", "I am studying", or "I was studying"?I'm studyingI am studyingI was studying
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.

As the result, could you recommend me about find the part-time job, I ever hear that you had been done
 it. Or I am not sure if you could In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 it. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me back.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Love
 and miss you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much,

Cheese W