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Study English at a school overseas

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Hi, My name is Alexandre Holanda and I would like some information about the English courses offered in UFC institute. First of all, I am going introduce myself: I am 33 years old, I am from Brazil, I never have live abroad and only study English by myself. I am looking for a course that improve my English to A1 level, nowadays I am B2 level. What kind of accommodation do you offer? I was think about a houseguest accommodation. I guess that is a great idea share the whole day with others English speakers, learning more about their culture and having someone to talk and train more the English skills. I don’t have any diet restriction. To be truth, I really love to try new experiences, playing new sports, know new places. I prefer live in a middle size city than a big city. I matter if I have to go by foot or use the public transportation. Thanks for your attention,

Hi,

My name is Alexandre Possible spelling mistake found.Yolanda
Holanda
 and I would like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about the English courses offered in UFC institute. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I am going introduce myself: I am 33 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, I am from Brazil, I never have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 abroad and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 study English by myself. I am looking for a course that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my English to A1 level, nowadays I am B2 level.

What kind of accommodation do you offer? I was Consider using a past participle here: "thought".thought
think
 about a Possible spelling mistake found.house guest
houseguest
 accommodation. I guess that is
 a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 share the whole day with others English speakers, learning more about their culture and having someone to talk and train more the English This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 don’t have any diet restriction. To be truth, I really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to try new experiences, playing new sports, know new places. I prefer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a middle size Use "(city)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(city)
city
 than a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 city. I matter if I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go by foot or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the public transportation.

Thanks for your attention, 