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Explain why you think your freind would enjoy a camping holiday.describe some possible disadvantages.say whether you would like to go camping with your freind this summer.

Explain why you think your freind would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your freind this summer. drxmp
Dear Rakin, I received your letter yesterday and I am very happy to know you will be going on a camping holiday. You have to choose Hill Tracks and you would be having a plethora of fun due to fact you and your group members must be carry some tent for stay. You and your group members have to play guitar, singing song an doing many kind of interesting things thats why I think you would enjoy this camping Tour. Camping holiday has some disadvantage sides among of them you should be aware to choosing places for stay. Moreover save from your self for eating unhygienic foods. You Have to keep aware of some dangerous animal attack. Some animals Poisonious so be careful about it. Me and my whole freind group going plan for some adventure and historical place and then we have to make camping this sides and we might be enjoy With excitemen. Your sincerelySourav
Dear
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Rakin
, I received your letter
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yesterday and
I am
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very
happy to know you will be going on a camping holiday. You
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have to
choose Hill
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Tracks
and you would be having a plethora of fun due to fact you and your group members
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must
be
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carry
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some
tent for stay. You and your group members
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have to
play guitar, singing song
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an
doing
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many kind
of interesting things
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thats
why I
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think
you would enjoy this camping Tour. Camping holiday has
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some
disadvantage sides among of them you should be aware to choosing places for stay.
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Moreover
save from your self for eating unhygienic foods. You
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Have to
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keep
aware of
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some
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dangerous
animal attack.
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Some
animals
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Poisonious
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so
be careful about it.
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Me
and my whole
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freind
group going plan for
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some
adventure and historical
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place and
then we
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have to
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make
camping this
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sides and
we might be
Consider using the past participle "enjoyed"?
enjoy
With
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excitemen
. Your
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
sincerelySourav

IELTS letter Explain why you think your freind would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your freind this summer.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
156 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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