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Explain why you think your freind would enjoy a camping holiday.describe some possible disadvantages.say whether you would like to go camping with your freind this summer.

Explain why you think your freind would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvantages. say whether you would like to go camping with your freind this summer. drxmp

Dear Rakin, I received your letter yesterday and I am very happy to know you will be going on a camping holiday. You have to choose Hill Tracks and you would be having a plethora of fun due to fact you and your group members must be carry some tent for stay. You and your group members have to play guitar, singing song an doing many kind of interesting things thats why I think you would enjoy this camping Tour. Camping holiday has some disadvantage sides among of them you should be aware to choosing places for stay. Moreover save from your self for eating unhygienic foods. You Have to keep aware of some dangerous animal attack. Some animals Poisonious so be careful about it. Me and my whole freind group going plan for some adventure and historical place and then we have to make camping this sides and we might be enjoy With excitemen. Your sincerelySourav

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.RainAkinRankinRabinRakingR akin
Rakin
, I received your letter Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).yesterday, and
yesterday and
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy to know you will be going on a camping holiday. You This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 choose Hill This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
Tracks
 and you would be having a plethora of fun due to fact you and your group members This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be Consider using a past participle here: "carried".carried
carry
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tent for stay. You and your group members This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 play guitar, singing song Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 doing Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: "many kinds".many kinds
many kind
 of interesting things Possible spelling mistake foundthat's
thats
 why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you would enjoy this camping Tour. Camping holiday has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disadvantage sides among of them you should be aware to choosing places for stay. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 save from your self for eating unhygienic foods. You This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
Have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 aware of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 animal attack. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 animals Possible spelling mistake found.Poisonous
Poisonious
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 be careful about it. When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my whole Possible spelling mistake found.friendbrandreadFrankgrandfraud
freind
 group going plan for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 adventure and historical Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).place, and
place and
 then we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 camping this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sides, and
sides and
 we might be Consider using the past participle "enjoyed"?enjoyed
enjoy
 With Possible spelling mistake found.excitementexcite men
excitemen
. Your Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsincerelySourav.sincerelySourav!sincerelySourav?sincerelySourav:sincerelySourav,sincerelySourav;
sincerelySourav