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Letter: You and your family are on holiday abroad. You are staying in a hotel, but you are not satisfied with some aspects of the accomodation. Write a letter to the the hotel manager.

Letter: You and your family are on holiday abroad. You are staying in a hotel, but you are not satisfied with some aspects of the accomodation. Write a letter to the the hotel manager. rKppo

Dear Sir, I am writing to complainbout the poor service provided by your hotel. In fact, it was not what I expected. The staffwere very friendly and the location is extremely convenient. However, I feel I must express my dissappointment about the room. The main problem is that the beds were not properly done and the bathrooms were still dirty. They rarelychanged my bed sheets and towels. I wonder what do the housecleaning people at your hotel do exactly to prepare the room for the next guest? Another serious problem is related to the poor quality of electricity. I didn't dream of facing electricity cut-off in sucha three star hotel. You have got electrical appliances which either wouldn't work or there would be no electricity to operate. I hope that you will look into this situation as a matter of some urgency and that the service offered by your hotel will improve Yours sincerely, Jane Brown

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complainbout
 the poor service provided by your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
. In fact, it was not what I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
. The Possible spelling mistake found.staff were
staffwere
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 friendly and the location is extremely
 convenient. However
, I feel I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 express my Possible spelling mistake found.disappointment
dissappointment
 about the room. The main problem is that the beds were not properly
 done and the bathrooms were still
 dirty. They Possible spelling mistake found.rarely changed
rarelychanged
 my This word is normally spelled as one.bedsheets
bed sheets
 and towels. I wonder what do the housecleaning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 at your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 do exactly to prepare the room for the next
 guest? Another serious problem is related
 to the poor quality of electricity. I didn't dream of facing electricity This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
-off in Possible spelling mistake found.suchsuch aSacha
sucha
'three star' is missing a hyphen.three-star
three star
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hotel
. You have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 electrical appliances which either wouldn't work or there would be no electricity to operate. I hope that you will look into this situation as a matter of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 urgency and that the service offered by your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 Yours sincerely
, Jane Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphBrown.Brown!Brown?Brown:Brown,Brown;
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