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Letter: You and your family are on holiday abroad. You are staying in a hotel, but you are not satisfied with some aspects of the accomodation. Write a letter to the the hotel manager.

Letter: You and your family are on holiday abroad. You are staying in a hotel, but you are not satisfied with some aspects of the accomodation. Write a letter to the the hotel manager. rKppo
Dear Sir, I am writing to complainbout the poor service provided by your hotel. In fact, it was not what I expected. The staffwere very friendly and the location is extremely convenient. However, I feel I must express my dissappointment about the room. The main problem is that the beds were not properly done and the bathrooms were still dirty. They rarelychanged my bed sheets and towels. I wonder what do the housecleaning people at your hotel do exactly to prepare the room for the next guest? Another serious problem is related to the poor quality of electricity. I didn't dream of facing electricity cut-off in sucha three star hotel. You have got electrical appliances which either wouldn't work or there would be no electricity to operate. I hope that you will look into this situation as a matter of some urgency and that the service offered by your hotel will improve Yours sincerely, Jane Brown
Dear Sir, I am writing to
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complainbout
the poor service provided by your
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hotel
. In fact, it was not what I
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expected
. The
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staffwere
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very
friendly and the location is
extremely
convenient.
However
, I feel I
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must
express my
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dissappointment
about the room. The main problem is that the beds were not
properly
done and the bathrooms were
still
dirty. They
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rarelychanged
my
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bed sheets
and towels. I wonder what do the housecleaning
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people
at your
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hotel
do exactly to prepare the room for the
next
guest? Another serious problem
is related
to the poor quality of electricity. I didn't dream of facing electricity
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cut
-off in
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sucha
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three star
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hotel
. You have
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got
electrical appliances which either wouldn't work or there would be no electricity to operate. I hope that you will look into this situation as a matter of
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some
urgency and that the service offered by your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
will
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improve
Yours
sincerely
, Jane
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Brown
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IELTS letter Letter: You and your family are on holiday abroad. You are staying in a hotel, but you are not satisfied with some aspects of the accomodation. Write a letter to the the hotel manager.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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