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You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: describe the item you lost explain why you weren't happy with the customer service say what action you would like the company to take.

You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: describe the item you lost explain why you weren't happy with the customer service say what action you would like the company to take. LrGoR
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to formally report that I lost my house keys while on the 705 bus heading to Marina around 8. 00 last night. It's a bunch of keys being held together with a colorful charm tagged APPRENTICE. My letter also calls your attention to how nonchalant your staff was to me over the phone. Once I got off the bus and realised that my keys were missing, I called the customer service. It took your team 15 minutes to pick up a non toll-free line. Afterwards, I was able to speak with Katherine who while on the phone with me, was conversing with another colleague. I could point out that she barely heard my complaint due to the fact that she insisted I go through my route on three different occasions. Since she was unable to assist me, I had to break my door to access my house last night. In my opinion, this sort of behaviour is appalling and I demand an apology from your organisation for making me go through this resolvable stress. Katherine should as well be mandated to acquire a customer relation training to enable her relate to customers efficiently. I look forward to your feedback in this regard. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Grace
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
formally
report that I lost my
house
keys while on the 705 bus heading to Marina around 8. 00 last night. It's a bunch of keys
being held
together with a colorful charm tagged APPRENTICE. My letter
also
calls your attention to how nonchalant your staff was to me over the phone.

Once I
got
off the bus and
realised
that my keys were missing, I called the customer service. It took your team 15 minutes to pick up a
non toll-free
line. Afterwards, I was able to speak with Katherine who while on the phone with me, was conversing with another colleague. I could point out that she
barely
heard my complaint due to the fact that she insisted I go through my route on three
different
occasions. Since she was unable to assist me, I had to break my door to access my
house
last night.

In my opinion, this sort of
behaviour
is appalling and I demand an apology from your
organisation
for making me go through this resolvable
stress
. Katherine should
as well
be mandated
to acquire a customer relation training to enable her relate to customers
efficiently
. I look forward to your feedback in this regard. Thank you.

Yours
Sincerely
, Grace
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IELTS letter You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: describe the item you lost explain why you weren't happy with the customer service say what action you would like the company to take.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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