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You have lost an item of value on a train.

You have lost an item of value on a train. eeRBp
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to report a lost property of mine. Last Wednesday I was traveling from Surrey to Vancouver on one of your trains. I was carrying a wallet and kept it aside after buying some eatable from the seller inside the train. My wallet is brown in colour, it is made up of fine leather and my name (Alex) is stitched inside it. I am really worried about it as it was gifted to me by my wife on my first birthday also contains all my Cards and a bit of cash also. As you can see it is very important for me. For your information, I was sitting on Seat No - C5 on the B couch. I request you to please find and return to me on address or email me at - alexjohn@gmail. com I will be really thankful to you! Yours sincerely, Alex John
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to report a lost property of mine. Last Wednesday I was traveling from Surrey to Vancouver on one of your trains. I was carrying a wallet and
kept
it aside after buying
some
eatable from the seller inside the train.

My wallet is
brown in colour
, it
is made
up of fine leather and my name (Alex)
is stitched
inside it. I am
really
worried about it as it
was gifted
to me by my wife on my
first
birthday
also
contains all my Cards and a bit of cash
also
.

As you can
see
it is
very
important
for me. For your information, I was sitting on Seat No
-
C5 on the B couch. I request you to
please
find and return to me on address or email me at
-
alexjohn@gmail
.
com


I will be
really
thankful to you!

Yours
sincerely
,

Alex John
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IELTS letter You have lost an item of value on a train.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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