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You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the internet connection in your room.

You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the internet connection in your room. ElpBQ

Dear Sir or Madam My name is Akbar Kadirov and I am writing to you regarding my room 15 that I have been living there for three months. It is located on the second floor of the on campus accommodation. This year when our academic year began my room was equipped well and the internet was provided and was working accurately. However, a week ago there was any disorder and there have not been internet connection in my room since then. You know we, all students have to hand in our reports in time as now it is the semester time. For this reason we need internet connection extremely vital. Otherwise, we will get a number of difficulties and this causes our bad results which influence our study and scholarship. I would be so grateful from you if you considered my problem and provide me with the internet as soon as possible, since the deadline of our reports is in the next week. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Mr Kadirov

Dear Sir or Madam

My name is Akbar Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Kadirov, and
Kadirov and
 I am writing to you regarding my room 15 that I have been living there for three months. It is located
 on the second floor of the on campus accommodation.

This year when our academic year began my room was equipped
 well and the internet was provided
 and was working accurately
. However
, a week ago there was any disorder and there have not been internet connection in my room since then.

You know we, all students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 hand in our reports in time as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is the semester time. For this reason
 we need internet connection extremely
 vital. Otherwise
, we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a number of difficulties and this causes our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 results which influence our study and scholarship.

I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 grateful from you if you considered my problem and provide me with the internet as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible, since the deadline of our reports is in the next
 week.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully


Mr Possible spelling mistake found.Kirov
Kadirov