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You have left college but you didn’t say goodbye to your friend who lived in the room with you becau...

You have left college but you didn’t say goodbye to your friend who lived in the room with you becau. . . pXaay
Dear John, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in vibrant health. I am writing this letter to apologize you for not saying goodbye to you. Firstly, I apologize to you from the bottom of my heart. That day was extremely difficult for me because you were not there. Moreover, I already arranged two movie tickets for us, however due to your class I ought to go with my friend and after that we had dinner in our favourite restaurant. As you know, I booked my ticket in advance. Accordingly, after having dinner we went to railway station and got my train and on next morning I reached my city. My cousin came to receive me. After reaching home, I am, indeed, missing you. I have an idea whenever you free from your classes pay visit to my city. I assure you that we together have a lot of fun and I'm immensely excited for this. Hope to see you in the near future. With Love, Khushi.
Dear John,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in vibrant health. I am writing this letter to apologize you for not saying goodbye to you.

Firstly
, I apologize to you from the bottom of my heart. That day was
extremely
difficult for me
because
you were not there.
Moreover
, I already arranged two movie tickets for us,
however
due to your
class
I ought to
go with
my friend and after that we had dinner in our
favourite
restaurant.

As you know, I booked my ticket in advance.
Accordingly
, after having dinner we went to railway station and
got
my train and on
next
morning I reached my city. My cousin came to receive me.

After reaching home, I am,
indeed
, missing you. I have an
idea
whenever you free from your classes pay visit to my city. I assure you that we together have
a lot of
fun and I'm
immensely
excited for this.

Hope to
see
you in the near future.

With
Love
,

Khushi
.
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IELTS letter You have left college but you didn’t say goodbye to your friend who lived in the room with you becau. . .

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170 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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