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Write a letter to your friend to tell her you are planning to visit her country

Write a letter to your friend to tell her you are planning to visit her country EL7BB
My address: Hanoi, Vietnam My friend address: Tokyo, Japan Sub: My one-week trip to Japan Dated: 17/08/2022 Dear Gojo Satoru, I am happy to inform you that I am well set for a trip to your country. Actually, I had planned to visit Japan last summer, but I could not make it happen because of the pandemic. This time I decided to visit Japan with my mother for about 1 week, namely that I would go to Osaka. You know, I have never been to Japan, nor Osaka, so I think maybe you can recommend me to some famous tourist attractions in Osaka. I know that you live in Tokyo, but if my memory serves me right, you told me that you had been to Osaka so many times. I am planning to stay at Conrad Hotel during my trip. Do you have any suggestions for places near this hotel that I can visit? I really need your help so that it will be easier for me to explore the local places of interest. Hope that you will provide me some detailed information as soon as you receive this letter Looking forward to hearing from youGiang
My address: Hanoi, Vietnam

My friend address: Tokyo, Japan

Sub: My one-week trip to Japan

Dated:
17/08/2022


Dear
Gojo
Satoru
,

I am happy to inform you that I am well set for a trip to your country. Actually, I had planned to visit Japan last summer,
but
I could not
make
it happen
because
of the pandemic. This time I decided to visit Japan with my mother for about 1 week,
namely
that I would go to Osaka. You know, I have never been to Japan, nor Osaka,
so
I
think
maybe you can recommend me to
some
famous
tourist attractions in Osaka. I know that you
live
in Tokyo,
but
if my memory serves me right, you
told
me that you had been to Osaka
so
many
times. I am planning to stay at Conrad Hotel during my trip. Do you have any suggestions for places near this hotel that I can visit? I
really
need your
help
so
that it will be easier for me to explore the local places of interest. Hope that you will provide me
some
detailed information as
soon
as you receive this letter

Looking forward to hearing from
youGiang
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to tell her you are planning to visit her country

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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