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You and your neighbours have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad.Write a letter to your local council. In your letter,– explain what you have recently experienced – explain what the neighbours have recently experienced – ask what action will be taken to improve the service

You and your neighbours have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter, – explain what you have recently experienced – explain what the neighbours have recently experienced – ask what action will be taken to improve the service LGL1R
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain to you about the bad collection of garbage at sahibag area of baroda city. Since past couple of days sanitation workers not cleaning theraly as a result from the kitchen waste unbearable smell spoil entire atmosphere of society. In my society three asthma patients were living and they got infected a lot as not clear air is available. In addition to that, my one of neighbourhood families garbage was not collected hence mosquito and insect are lot there and thus 6 members of my neighbourhood have been suffering from the viral,  dengue and malaria. To address this concern, we society members would appreciate if AMC could send there few sanitisation workers within two days to swipe all dumps as well as its requirements of air pest control team to make environment antibacterial. I hope you understand detrimental effect of rubbish on health of people and waiting for your prompt action. your sincerely, Sati
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain to you about the
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bad
collection of garbage at
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sahibag
 area of
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baroda
city.

Since past couple of days sanitation workers not cleaning
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theraly
as a result
from the kitchen waste unbearable smell spoil entire atmosphere of society. In my society three asthma patients were
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living and
they
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got
infected a lot as not
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clear
air is available.

In addition
to that, my one of
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neighbourhood
families garbage was not collected
hence
mosquito and insect are lot there and
thus
6 members of my
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neighbourhood
have been suffering from the viral,
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dengue and malaria.

To address this concern,
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we society
members would appreciate if AMC could
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send
there few
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sanitisation
 workers within two days to swipe all dumps
as well
as its requirements of air pest control team to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
environment antibacterial.

I hope you understand detrimental effect of rubbish on health of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and waiting for your prompt action.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
your
sincerely
,

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Sati

IELTS letter You and your neighbours have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter, – explain what you have recently experienced – explain what the neighbours have recently experienced – ask what action will be taken to improve the service

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  American English
8 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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