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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.

You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. yK6l

Dear Mr. Cruz, My name is Alvin Dale and we spent our weekend together with my family at Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. The room were we stayed is at the family room on the tenth floor. The reason I am writing this letter is to inform you that unfortunately I left my bag at the hotel. As I remember, I put my bag at the dining table and forgot to pick it up before leaving the hotel. The brand of the bag is American Tourist and my name is engraved in the handled. The color of the bag is black with a blue sky printed on the side. It also has a Mickey Mouse key chain which has a sentimental value to me. I hope you have already found it and put in a safe place for now. I am planning to go to your hotel this coming weekends to personally checked the status of my missing bag. To be honest the things inside the bag are not really that important except for our travel documents which I will be needing in the end of the month. Hoping to hear from you. Sincerely yours, Alvin Dale.

Dear Mr. Cruz,

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Dale and
 we spent our weekend together with my family at Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. The room were we stayed is at the family room on the tenth floor. The reason I am writing this letter is to inform you that unfortunately I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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bag
 at the hotel. As I remember, I put my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 at the dining table and forgot to pick it up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 leaving the hotel.

The brand of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 is American Tourist and my name is engraved
 in the handled. The color of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 is black with a blue sky printed on the side. It also
 has a Mickey Mouse key chain which has a sentimental value to me.

I hope you have already found it and put in a safe place for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. I am planning to go to your hotel this coming weekends to personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 the status of my missing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
. To be honest the things inside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 are not really
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 our travel documents which I will The verb 'needing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be needing
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the month.

Hoping to hear from you.

Sincerely
 yours,

Alvin Dale. 