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You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require.

You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require. REOQ
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you to get some information regarding the accommodation during our trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales. We are planning a trip for a group of students, and it would be great if you could give me more detailed information. I am Hie, a Mathematics teacher in a high school in Westerm Australia. We are arranging to take a break to your area next month. As scheduled, it would be from 2nd February to 9th February, which means the duration of our stay will last one week. Our team has 5 teachers, and 30 students - 35 in total, so we wish to dwell in five large deluxe rooms which have good facilities such as kitchens and air-conditioners. It will be more delightful if we have some spacious outdoor space for BBQ. Could you please kindly let me know the availability of accommodation and booking details if possible? I am sincerely looking forward to your response soon. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Hie.
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to you to
get
some
information regarding the accommodation during our trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales. We are planning a trip for a group of students, and it would be great if you could give me more detailed information.

I am Hie, a Mathematics teacher in a high school in
Westerm
Australia. We are arranging to take a break to your area
next
month. As scheduled, it would be from 2nd February to 9th February, which means the duration of our stay will last one week. Our team has 5 teachers, and 30 students
-
35 in total,
so
we wish to dwell in five large deluxe rooms which have
good
facilities such as kitchens and air-conditioners. It will be more delightful if we have
some
spacious outdoor space for BBQ.

Could you
please
kindly
let
me know the availability of accommodation and booking
details
if possible? I am
sincerely
looking forward to your response
soon
.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hie.
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IELTS letter You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require.

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