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advertisement about to look after the child

advertisement about to look after the child V9b7

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement in The Today magazine that you are looking for a caretaker to look after your son for the duration of 6 months while you are away. This would be an extremely great opportunity for me to spend time with your son as I am pursuing a Childcare course and I will be in Australia during that time for my international internship. Ultimately, it is my part of the program to learn about the aspects of child care and this stay would provide an in-hand experience of this. Before this also I was helping my aunt in babysitting and also I love to play with children. In my free time, I would be doing my internship projects that also relate to child development. You can contact me on 9888777899 to further discuss it. Hoping to hear a positive response. Yours faithfully, zxnnn

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement in The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 magazine that you are looking for a caretaker to look after your son for the duration of 6 months while you are away.

This would be an extremely
 great opportunity for me to spend time with your son as I am pursuing a Childcare course and I will be in Australia during that time for my international internship. Ultimately
, it is my part of the program to learn about the aspects of child care and this stay would provide an in-hand experience of this.

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Before
 this also
 I was helping my aunt in babysitting and also
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to play with children. In my free time, I would be doing my internship projects that also
 relate to child development.

You can contact me on 9888777899 to further
 discuss it.

Hoping to hear a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

Yours faithfully
,

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