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You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your country

You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your country N9Ob

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to suggest a few corrections regarding an article published in your magazine about my home country India. In your article titled “ India: The homeland of all religions. ”, is very suggestive and conveys an opinion of how my motherland is only about different religions and people practicing them. Apart from religion, India is also a multicultural country displaying diversity in food, clothing, and other activities. Displaying India as an emerging developed nation would seem more appropriate. India is a leading example of a country with a strong educational system as we can find many Indians leading the global markets such as Vice President of USA Mrs. Kamla Harris, Surinder Pichai, CEO of Google, and many more. I would request you to kindly make the needful changes and publish another article about India which is well informed and displays the multiple facets of the country instead of just one. I await your prompt response. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Aarunima

Dear Sir or Madam,

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, CEO of Google, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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 more.

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 and publish another article about India which is This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-informed
well informed
 and displays the multiple facets of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
instead
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 one. I await your prompt response.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

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