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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you debo
Dear Rose, This past week was wonderful owing to your preparation for our holiday and I had the best time ever in Dubai with you and your family. But, I am writing you to mention about my wallet which I left at your place. While expressing my feeling about this last week, I am short of words as your hospitality was quite warming. I cannot ignore the fact that you gave me your room with the beautiful view of “Dubai Frame” so that I could have best out of my stay. Most importantly, creating menus of all meals as per taste was commendable effort of yours and my thank you for all this would be very less of a gesture. In all this merriment, when I was leaving the place to catch my flight, I probably have placed my wallet on the dressing table of your room. I vividly remember that your son, Jamie, hugged me from back playfully due to which I might forget to pick it up. Apparently, the wallet consists of all my cards and Id proofs which I would be requiring nearly every day, thereby, I would really request you to send it back to me as early as possible. For the same, luckily, my aunt is in Dubai and she has plans to return tomorrow to India. Of course, I am bothering you but I will be grateful if you could hand it over to her at her place by today evening. Thus, she could carry it with herself tomorrow. Thanking you again and hope to see you pretty soon. Yours truly, Maria.
Dear Rose,

This past week was wonderful owing to your preparation for our holiday and I had the best time ever in Dubai with you and your family.
But
, I am writing you to
mention about my
wallet which I
left
at your place.

While expressing my feeling about this last week, I am short of words as your hospitality was quite warming. I cannot
ignore
the fact that you gave me your room with the
beautiful
view of “Dubai Frame”
so
that I could have best out of my stay. Most
importantly
, creating menus of all meals as per taste was commendable effort of yours and my thank you for all this would be
very
less of a gesture.

In all this merriment, when I was leaving the place to catch my flight, I
probably
have placed my wallet on the dressing table of your room. I
vividly
remember that your son, Jamie, hugged me from back
playfully
due to which I might forget to pick it up.

Apparently
, the wallet consists of all my cards and
Id
proofs which I would be requiring
nearly
every day, thereby, I would
really
request you to
send
it back to me as early as possible. For the same, luckily, my aunt is in
Dubai and
she has plans to return tomorrow to India.
Of course
, I am bothering you
but
I will be grateful if you could hand it over to her at her place by
today evening
.
Thus
, she could carry it with herself tomorrow.

Thanking you again and hope to
see
you pretty
soon
.

Yours
truly
,

Maria.
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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