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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. rQAn
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding purchases made on my credit card that I never had and showing in my last credit card statement. To begin with, I am user of your bank since september 2018 holding account number 123456789. In my previous statement I noticed there are two transactions amount of 650. 00 dollars that I never made. First one is for an Samsung mobile phone costs 600 dollars and other is mobile cover for 50 dollars. I am assuming there might be an mistake from bank side or may be there is an fraud. I am requesting you to investigate this problem as a serious matter, due to fact of that I am facing financial issue because I do not have enough money to pay that bill. I hope you will take very soon an strict action. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Kamalpreet Singh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding
purchases
made on my credit card that I never had and showing in my last credit card statement.

To
begin
with, I am user of your bank since
september
2018 holding account number 123456789. In my previous statement I noticed there are two transactions amount of 650. 00 dollars that I never made.
First
one is for
an
Samsung mobile phone costs 600 dollars and other is mobile cover for 50 dollars. I am assuming there might be
an
mistake from bank side or may be there is
an
fraud.

I am requesting you to investigate this problem as a serious matter, due to fact of that I am facing financial issue
because
I do not have
enough
money to pay that bill.
I
hope you will take
very
soon
an
strict action.

I
look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Kamalpreet
Singh
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IELTS letter You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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