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write a letter to the local council about the closure of the playground and explain 1. Why so few children are using the playground, how to increase the number of children using the playground,, why this is important

write a letter to the local council about the closure of the playground and explain 1. Why so few children are using the playground, how to increase the number of children using the playground, , why this is important 1JwA

Dear sir, My name is kulwinder, a resident of the gore area, Brampton. I am writing this letter to express my concern about the closure of the playground. I read this news in the local tabloid. There is plan to open a mall in this plan as the council members think this is not a popular place among children. The main reason behind this is the condition of the playground. This playground has been here since 2002 and it is not renovated since then. Because of that most of the recreational equipment's are old and are not in good condition. As a result of that most parents are afraid to let their children's play in the playground as they can het hurt. I suggest you renovate the playground and buy new recreational equipment and you can start a donation camp in order to get funds for the renovation. I am sure parents will not mind giving some money in order to get their children out to play as children today are suffering from obesity and are not socializing with other children, You can also get some benches where elderly can sit and socialize. They can also over look the children. Sir, It is imperative that the playground stays open. Hoping for a favorable response in this matter. Yours faithfully, Kulwinder.

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