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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Pxop
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this in connection with a misguidance caused by the airport announcement, which led to missing of flight. I am Kavya Paruchuri, and I am a frequent flyer of your airlines. I like the timely flights and services on and off the plane. These reasons made me prefer your airlines to others. I was supposed to board a flight last Sunday night. I came to the airport ahead of time, completed the check in and started waiting in terminal A gate 21, as the flight to phoenix was announced to be departing from here. It's not until 15 min before the flight time, did the airport authorities realize that they announced a wrong terminal, and the same was reflected on all the digital screens. The travel time from terminal A to terminal C took about 20 min, which made me miss my flight. I was supposed to present to my clients on the consecutive morning. As the flight that I missed was the last one for the day. I boarded a flight on Monday morning. Obviously, I am late the next day. And I have to re-schedule my presentation, making all of my team-mates, supervisors and clients wait. Which is very huge embarrasement for me and my company. In future, I think the airport should cross check their schedules before announcing to avoid such mishaps. And if anything such sort occurs, they should take the time between terminals into consideration and delay flights accordingly. I am totally dissatisfied with my last trip, and would like to have a complete refund. Yours sincerely, Kavya Paruchuri.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this in connection with a misguidance caused by the
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airport
announcement, which led to missing of flight.

I am
'Kavya' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "kāvya"
Kavya
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Paruchuri
, and I am a frequent flyer of your airlines.
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I
like the timely
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flights
and services on and off the
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plane
. These reasons made me prefer your airlines to others. I
was supposed
to board a
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flight
last Sunday night. I came to the
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airport
ahead of
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time
, completed the
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check
in and
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started
waiting in
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terminal
A gate 21, as the
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flight
to phoenix
was announced
to be departing from here. It's not until 15 min
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before
the
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flight
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time
, did the
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airport
authorities realize that they announced a
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wrong
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terminal
, and the same
was reflected
on all the digital screens. The travel
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time
from
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terminal
A to
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terminal
C took about 20 min, which made me miss my flight.

I
was supposed
to present to my clients on the consecutive morning. As the
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flight
that I missed was the last one for the day. I boarded a
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flight
on Monday morning.
Obviously
, I am late the
next
day. And I
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have to
re-schedule my presentation, making all of my team-mates, supervisors and clients wait. Which is
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very
huge
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embarrasement
for me and my
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company
.

Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, I
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think
the
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airport
should cross
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check
their schedules
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before
announcing to avoid such mishaps. And if anything such sort occurs, they should take the
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time
between
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terminals
into consideration and delay
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flights
accordingly
. I am
totally
dissatisfied with my last trip, and would like to have a complete refund.

Yours
sincerely
,

'Kavya' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "kāvya"
Kavya
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Paruchuri
.

IELTS letter You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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