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you recently experienced a problem at your local cinema. Write a letter to the cinema manager regarding the problem you had.

you recently experienced a problem at your local cinema. Write a letter to the cinema manager regarding the problem you had. LWVK

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the recent experience I had at your PVR cinema. I went over there with my friends to watch the latest movie The Thor. I would like to state that your cinema has some issue which has to be improved. Firstly, I would like to talk about on sound system at the movie hall. The quality of voice was not quite impressive which leads to understanding the story of the film. Secondly, the screen of the theater was not fully clear, It seems that It does not change for a long time. I would be grateful If you could change the old speakers with the latest models and for improving the quality of the movie you should install the new screen for your viewers. I hope you will consider my suggestions to overcome these problems. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Guri.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the recent experience I had at your PVR cinema. I went over there with my friends to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the latest movie The Thor. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to state that your cinema has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issue which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
.

Firstly
, I would like to talk about on sound system at the movie hall. The quality of voice was not quite impressive which leads to understanding the story of the film. Secondly
, the screen of the theater was not fully
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
, It seems that It does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 for a long time. I would be grateful If you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 speakers with the latest models and for improving the quality of the movie you should install the new screen for your viewers. I hope you will consider my suggestions to overcome these problems. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully
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