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You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet

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Dear sir, My name is Poonam, and i am a frequent user of your online website. I am writing this letter to inform you about the delayed delivery of the text book that i ordered from your official site. Well, let me explain the situation. Actually, I booked Ielts speaking booster from your site on 12th March and the expected delivery of the book was two days later that is 14th March, Consequently, today is 15th March and I did not received my book yet. To be honest, I strongly need this handouts due to the fact that my exam is scheduled on 18th March. Apart from this, my speaking exam will on 17th March. To be brutally honest, I ordered this book on the recommendation of one of my friends, who told me that the most of the topics of speaking booster is designed according to the exam pattern so that is the reason why, I deadly need this book. Would you please, deliver me the book on tomorrow. If it is not possible then you can also send me the original pdf of the handouts in my personal email which I mention below. If you do this it will be a great help for me. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Poonam.
Dear sir,

My name is
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Poonam
, and
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i
am a frequent user of your online website. I am writing this letter to inform you about the delayed delivery of the text
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book
that
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i
ordered from your official site.

Well,
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let
me
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explain
the situation. Actually, I booked
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Ielts
speaking booster from your site on 12th March and the
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expected
delivery of the
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book
was two days later
that is
14th March,
Consequently
,
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today
is 15th March and I did not
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received
my
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book
yet
. To be honest, I
strongly
need this handouts due to the fact that my exam
is scheduled
on 18th March. Apart from this, my speaking exam will on 17th March. To be
brutally
honest, I ordered this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on the recommendation of one of my friends, who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that the most of the topics of speaking booster
is designed
according to the exam pattern
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so
that is
the reason why, I deadly need this book.

Would you
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please
, deliver me the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on tomorrow. If it is not possible then you can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the original
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pdf
of the handouts in my personal email which I mention below. If you do this it will be a great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
for me.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Poonam
.
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IELTS letter You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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