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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do J90w
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Smith and I am writing in response to a letter sent from the Bank of Canberra's head office, which asked me to confirm if I have received my new credit card. I am writing to inform you that I received a letter from the bank three days ago. However, I noticed that the envelope was ripped open and found that the credit card has gone missing. I have reported this incident to my local police station and my local Bank of Canberra branch. I am worried that someone could use my new credit card. Is it possible for the bank to freeze the stolen card? If my stolen credit card is used, would this affect me my credit score? Could you please tell me what steps the bank would take following this report? Please contact me at the earliest convenience to discuss this situation. Yours faithfully, John Smith (Mr. )
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is John
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Smith and
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sent
from the
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Bank
of Canberra's head office, which asked me to confirm if I have received my new
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credit
card.

I am writing to inform you that I received a letter from the
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bank
three days ago.
However
, I noticed that the envelope
was ripped
open and found that the
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credit
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card
has gone missing. I have reported this incident to my local police station and my local
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Bank
of Canberra branch.

I
am worried
that someone could
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use
my new
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credit
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card
. Is it possible for the
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bank
to freeze the stolen
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card
? If my stolen
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credit
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card
is
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used
, would this affect me my
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credit
score? Could you
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please
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tell
me what steps the
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bank
would take following this report?

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Please
contact me at the earliest convenience to discuss this situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Smith (Mr.
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IELTS letter You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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