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You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday.When you got home,you realised you have left your wallet there.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter thankyou friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you have left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thankyou friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you 9Ng3
Dear Jay, I hope this letter will encounter you in the pink of your health. I reached back safely on 20th January 2021. My family members are also fine here. I would like to convey special thanks to you for giving me your precious time and making my holiday tour superb. The way you deal facilities and me you provide me there have no words to say and express my gratitude for you. Especially, I will never forget the delicious traditional dishes your mom cooked for me and always waited for us even late night when we came back from excursions. When I landed here I noticed that my Driving licenses in not with me. I tried to search it a lot in my hand-carry and luggage as well. Once I thought that may be I lost it in the plane upon recalling, it came to my mind that I forgot it in your home on the bed post of the Guest room. As I last time take out my wallet there to give some money to your younger brother to buy a gift from my side. I need it here as the wallet contains my I. D card, driving license, ATM card and other daily use Membership cards. I will be highly obliged If u Courier it to me by DHL as it is easy and convenient method to take it in earliest hours. You have to post it on my father name i. e David son House no 4. garden avenue. XYZ. Pay my salam to all at home and I will write you again as soon as I received my purse. With love, Mehwish.
Dear Jay,

I hope this letter will encounter you in the pink of your health. I reached back
safely
on 20th January 2021. My family members are
also
fine here. I would like to convey special thanks to you for giving me your precious time and making my holiday tour superb. The way you deal facilities and me you provide me there have no words to say and express my gratitude for you.
Especially
, I will never forget the delicious traditional dishes your mom cooked for me and always waited for us even late night when we came back from excursions.

When
I landed here I noticed that my Driving licenses in not with me. I tried to search it a lot in my hand-carry and luggage
as well
. Once I
thought
that
may be
I lost it in the
plane
upon recalling, it came to my mind that I forgot it in your home on the bed post of the Guest room.
As
I last time take out my wallet there to give
some
money to your younger brother to
buy
a gift from my side.

I need it here as the wallet contains my I. D card, driving license, ATM card and other daily
use
Membership cards. I will be
highly
obliged If u Courier it to me by DHL as it is easy and convenient method to take it in
earliest
hours. You
have to
post it on my father name i. e David son
House
no 4.
garden
avenue. XYZ.

Pay my
salam
to all at home and I will write you again as
soon
as I received my purse.

With
love
,

Mehwish
.
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IELTS letter You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you have left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thankyou friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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  American English
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277 words
6.0
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