Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You eat at your favourite restaurant every day for lunch. You do not like the decor they have chosen. Write the manager a letter telling him: What you think is great about the restaurant? What things you think need to be changed? Suggestions on ways to improve the decor?

You eat at your favourite restaurant every day for lunch. You do not like the decor they have chosen. Write the manager a letter telling him: What you think is great about the restaurant? What things you think need to be changed? Suggestions on ways to improve the decor? G2Ej
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Royal Singh and i eat lunch at your restaurant daily. I am writing this letter to tell you about my opinion on the decor of the restaurant and how it can be improved. First of all, i would like to tell you that the food served here is one of the best in taste and quality. Everyday i look forward excitingly to eat my lunch here. Also, the service provided the staff is exceptional and outstanding. In the past two months, since i started eating here, not even once the food arrived late or was not upto it's standard. It always arrived in a good presentation and was always warm. Also, the staff is very professional and helpful. To add I never have any issues in waiting for few minutes if the table is not available on the busy days. While the food and service is above the bar but there's one thing that's troubling me that is the tables, table clothes and the chairs. Most of the tables and chairs are out of balance. Also the table clothes look really old and tethered. Moreover, they are completely in contrast with the overall ambience of the place. I would like to suggest you to replace the tables and chairs with a new model which compliments the modern architecture of the building. Also, it would be great if the table clothes are replaced with some that are matching with the curtains and the painting on the walls. I really like the restaurant and it's one of my favaourites. I want it to be the best in the town and so provided my suggestions on the things that can be improved. I hope you will consider my suggestions. Yours Sincerely Royal Singh
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Royal Singh and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
eat lunch at your restaurant daily. I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about my opinion on the decor of the restaurant and how it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that the food served here is one of the best in taste and quality.
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
Everyday
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
look forward
excitingly
to eat my lunch here.
Also
, the service provided the staff is exceptional and outstanding. In the past two months, since
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
eating here, not even once the food arrived late or was not
Possible spelling mistake found.
upto
it's standard. It always arrived in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
presentation and was always warm.
Also
, the staff is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
professional and helpful. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
I never have any issues in waiting for few minutes if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
is not available on the busy days.

While the food and service is above the bar
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there's one thing that's troubling me
that is
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tables
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
clothes and the chairs. Most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tables
and chairs are out of balance.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
clothes look
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
and tethered.
Moreover
, they are completely
in contrast
with the
overall
ambience of the place.

I would like to suggest you to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tables
and chairs with a new model which compliments the modern architecture of the building.
Also
, it would be great if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
clothes
are replaced
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
that are matching with the curtains and the painting on the walls.

I
really
like the restaurant and it's one of my
Possible spelling mistake found.
favaourites
. I want it to be the best in the town and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
provided my suggestions on the things that can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will consider my suggestions.

Yours
Sincerely


Royal Singh
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You eat at your favourite restaurant every day for lunch. You do not like the decor they have chosen. Write the manager a letter telling him: What you think is great about the restaurant? What things you think need to be changed? Suggestions on ways to improve the decor?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • You eat at your favourite restaurant every day for lunch. You do not like the decor they have chosen. Write the manager a letter telling him: What you think is great about the restaurant? What things you think need to be changed? Suggestions on ways to improve the decor?