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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer KQa3

Dear Catherine, I received your letter about the holiday plan to go camping this summer. All the best wishes for your trip. I hope your first experience with camping in summer turn out to be the best one. When i read you letter it left me nostaligic. I had my first summer camp holiday in Ohio. It was a great experience for me. I used to wake up by witnessing the mesemrising view of sunrise on the Ohio beach and slept under the glaring sheet of stars. The beaches at Ohio are a great treat for rafting and swimming. The water is not too salty and the depth of the sea is not more than 15m. You can enjoy the drinks from the beach bars. The cocktail Bar of Ohio beach is one of the famous in USA. The food is exceptionally good at the Filli's Cafe which is loacted in a small town area almost 2km from the beach. For the night gatherings you can register yourself at the Ohio Beach Club, they have bonfires, Dance shows and barbeques every night so you will have a good time there and might meet new friends. Now that i have told you about all the fun activities at the camping trip i shall advice you about some of the cautions. You should carry two to three swimsuits with you and two fullsuits as it will come in handy because the sand at the beach is very muddy. You should also check the weather forecast as Ohio is expecting rain this summer. Lastly, try not to indulge with the strangers at the beach because they are usually criminals and might take un necessary advantage from you. I can't believe you are finally planning to have your first summer camp. I would love to come with yiu but unfortunately i have to vist my grand mother this summer who was hospitalised due to cancer and there is no one to take care for her. Please pray for her speedy recovery. I hope you have a great time at Ohio beach on you summer camp. Do share about your experience and remember about all the advices i have told you about as they are from my personal experince. Yours Sincerly Mehreen

Dear Catherine,

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summer
. All the best wishes for your trip. I hope your first
 experience with camping in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacationsummertime
summer
 turn out to be the best one.

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nostaligic
. I had my first
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summer
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used
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mesemrising
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beach
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. You can enjoy the drinks from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
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famous
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loacted
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small
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beach
. For the night gatherings you can register yourself at the Ohio You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
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shows
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barbeques
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so
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good
 time there and might This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new friends.

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 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
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advice
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some of the
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fullsuits
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come
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because
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beach
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very
 muddy. You should also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the weather forecast as Ohio is expecting rain this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacationsummertime
summer
. Lastly
, try not to indulge with the strangers at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
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because
 they are usually
 criminals and might take Possible spelling mistake found.UNinonanupus
un
 necessary advantage from you.

I can't believe you are finally
 planning to have your first
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summer
 camp. I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with Possible spelling mistake found.youyinyipAIUBIUCIU
yiu
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but
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have to
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vist
 my grand mother this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacationsummertime
summer
 who was Possible spelling mistake. 'hospitalised' is British English.hospitalized
hospitalised
 due to cancer and there is no one to take care for her. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 pray for her speedy recovery.

I hope you have a great time at Ohio You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 on you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacationsummertime
summer
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i
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 you about as they are from my personal Possible spelling mistake found.experience
experince
.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sincerly


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Mehreen