Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer kkaW
Dear Michael, I hope you're doing well. It was so good to hear that you're going on a camping holiday in Stanford Hills during summer break. As it will be your first time on camping anywhere, I really hope you will enjoy the natural beauty of the mountain and pollution-free clean air. It isn't only the beauty and memerising views, but the experience that one can have during camping is really special. You're an adventurous person yourself, and I can assume that living out of comforts and luxuries of our daily lives, would pump adrealine in your veins and refresh you for your next work projects. Since you already know that I'm a huge fan of camping and used to go camping at least twice a year, I'd love to come along with you. However, it'd not be justifying to leave Pamela alone with our newborn daughter Cece. Let's make another plan for next year and count me in. I wish you a great trip. Yours Sincerely, James Halpert
Dear Michael,

I hope you're doing well.

It was
so
good
to hear that you're going on a camping holiday in Stanford Hills during summer break. As it will be your
first
time on camping anywhere, I
really
hope you will enjoy the natural beauty of the mountain and pollution-free clean air.

It isn't
only
the beauty and
memerising
views,
but
the experience that one can have during camping is
really
special. You're an adventurous person yourself, and I can assume that living out of comforts and luxuries of our daily
lives
, would pump
adrealine
in your veins and refresh you for your
next
work projects.

Since you already know that I'm a huge fan of camping and
used
to go camping at least twice a year, I'd
love
to
come
along with you.
However
, it'd not be justifying to
leave
Pamela alone with our newborn daughter
Cece
.
Let
's
make
another plan for
next
year and count me in.

I wish you a great trip.

Yours
Sincerely
,

James
Halpert
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: