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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 5PqA
Dear Mr. David, At the outset, please allow me to explain the reason for the noise. It was my birthday last week, and since I am new to the university. My classmates decided to throw me a surprise party at my place. I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you due to the celebration of my birthday. It was very careless on my part to not ensure society guidelines and rules. I submit that this will not happen again, I have already informed my friends and enforced a home-curfew of 8 P. M. I would also like to inform that I am getting rid of my music system as that was not needed instead I am using earphones now. I hope these changes will be sufficient for now and we continue to be the helping and supportive neighbors we are. Yours' sincerely, Ravneet Singh House No. 112Fifth AvenueBoulevard Garden
Dear Mr. David,

At the outset,
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please
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allow
me to
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explain
the reason for the noise. It was my birthday last week, and since I am new to the university. My classmates decided to throw me a surprise party at my place.

I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you due to the celebration of my birthday. It was
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very
careless on my part to not ensure society guidelines and
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rules
.

I submit that this will not happen again, I have already informed my friends and enforced a home-curfew of 8 P. M. I would
also
like to inform that I am getting rid of my music system as that was not needed
instead
I am using earphones
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now
. I hope these
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changes
will be sufficient for
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
now and
we continue to be the helping and supportive neighbors we are.

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "Yours"?
Yours'
sincerely
,

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Ravneet
Singh

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House
No. 112Fifth
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AvenueBoulevard
Garden

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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