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You have just returned home after living with a family in an English speaking country for six months.you now recall that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room.writing to family describing the things you left behind ask them to send some of them you.offer cover of cost.

You have just returned home after living with a family in an English speaking country for six months. you now recall that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. writing to family describing the things you left behind ask them to send some of them you. offer cover of cost. 2nJ6
Dear Mr and Mrs. VyasI hope you both are fine and healthy. While I stay at your home, I had spent memorable time with your family and enjoyed a lot. I really missed our outings, conversation. Thank you so much for your hospitality. When I returned my home and started unpacking my luggage. Then I realised that I missed something and when I recollect it, I had left a hand bag in my bedroom where I was staying at your home. Actually this bag is not important for me but a gold ring which is inside the bags is very valuable for me. This ring is near to my heart because it is first gift of my husband. So I am requesting you to send me by courier. I know that I am giving you trouble, if it is not important then I didn’t ask you to do favour. whatever charged of this courier, I will transfers to your account. l already message you my address on which you should courier. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you so much for help. With warm regards, Shivani
Dear Mr and Mrs.
VyasI
hope you both are fine and healthy. While I stay at your home, I had spent memorable time with your family and enjoyed a lot. I
really
missed our outings, conversation. Thank you
so
much for your hospitality. When I returned my home and
started
unpacking my luggage. Then I
realised
that I missed something and when I recollect it, I had
left
a hand bag in my bedroom where I was staying at your home. Actually this bag is not
important
for me
but
a gold ring which is inside the bags is
very
valuable for me. This ring is near to my heart
because
it is
first
gift of my husband.
So
I am requesting you to
send
me by courier. I know that I am giving you trouble, if it is not
important
then I didn’t ask you to do
favour
.
whatever
charged of this courier, I will
transfers
to your account.
l
already message you my address on which you should courier. Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
. Thank you
so
much for
help
. With warm regards,
Shivani
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IELTS letter You have just returned home after living with a family in an English speaking country for six months. you now recall that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. writing to family describing the things you left behind ask them to send some of them you. offer cover of cost.

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  American English
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187 words
5.5
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