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Dear Tom I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new.

Dear Tom I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new. r30J
Dear Tom I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new. I was really fed up with being a brain surgeon because it wasn’t really much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I get bored too easily and have to find something new. I’m now teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten class, which is not only challenging but also rewarding too. Can you believe it? I also have some other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my first ever students and I guess it was love at first sight for both of us. Make sure you keep the first weekend in July free, so you can come and celebrate with us. Keep in touch XYZ
Dear Tom

I’m
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writing to
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let
you know I quit my
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old
job and found something new.

I was
really
fed up with being a brain surgeon
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because
it wasn’t
really
much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I
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get
bored too
easily
and
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have to
find something new.

I’m
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now
teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten
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class
, which is not
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only
challenging
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but
also
rewarding too. Can you believe it?

I
also
have
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some
other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my
first
ever students and I guess it was
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love
at
first
sight for both of us.
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Make
sure you
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keep
the
first
weekend in July free,
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so
you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and celebrate with us.

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Keep
in touch

XYZ

IELTS letter Dear Tom I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
149 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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