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You Have Just Returned From A Conference And Want To Give A Presentation To Your Colleagues

You Have Just Returned From A Conference And Want To Give A Presentation To Your Colleagues 8dE9x

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in giving a presentation to share the business ideas and strategies which I learned from the seminar I attended last week. The meeting was based on planning and budgeting. Professionals and experts from international corporations participated in the seminar and they compared accounting and financial sheets of different companies. Also, they highlighted various strategies to increase revenue by eliminating unnecessary expenses. I would like to give a brief presentation to our company’s employees. This would help our workers to ascertain where we are standing today and where we are planning to reach in the future. Furthermore, I want to suggest some ideas to reduce the average cost of goods and I want to highlight valuable action plans which would help workers to work effectively and efficiently. Thank you for your consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Hadiya Abdurahmonova

Dear Sir,

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ideas
 and strategies which I learned from the seminar I attended last week. The meeting was based
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different
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companies
. Also
, they highlighted various strategies to increase revenue by eliminating unnecessary expenses.

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company
’s employees. This would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 our workers to ascertain where we are standing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and where we are planning to reach in the future. Furthermore
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some
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ideas
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the average cost of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and I want to highlight valuable action plans which would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 workers to work effectively
 and efficiently
.

Thank you for your consideration.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

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