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The cancellation of this program

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to the latest news that the work placement programme has been cancelled this summer. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to the latest news that the work placement programme has been cancelled this summer. The cancellation of this program can be a serious obstacle for me on the way to achieving the required academic hours in this discipline, so I hope you will consider my situation favorably. Since our course consisted of classroom lessons and practice in the employment program, I had a choice of how to get the required minimum academic hours to complete the discipline. I was not able to get all the required academic hours in class due to illness and it was planned that I would be able to recruit them in summer work, but now this has become impossible. So now I am in a rather alarming position. Therefore, I ask you, maybe you will consider the possibility of obtaining additional academic hours with some alternative ways? For example, completing additional written work or attending extra classes. I am looking forward to your confirmation. Thanking you in advance Kind regards, Albina Urubkina, can be a serious obstacle for me on the way to achieving the required academic hours in this discipline, so I hope you will consider my situation favorably. Since our course consisted of classroom lessons and practice in the employment program, I had a choice of how to get the required minimum academic hours to complete the discipline. I was not able to get all the required academic hours in class due to illness and it was planned that I would be able to recruit them in summer work, but now this has become impossible. So now I am in a rather alarming position. Therefore, I ask you, maybe you will consider the possibility of obtaining additional academic hours with some alternative ways? For example, completing additional written work or attending extra classes. I am looking forward to your confirmation. Thanking you in advance Kind regards, Albina Urubkina,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with regard to the latest news that the
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work
placement
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programme
has
been cancelled
this
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summer
. Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with regard to the latest news that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
placement
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programme
has
been cancelled
this
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summer
. The cancellation of this program can be a serious obstacle for me on the
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way
to achieving the
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required
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academic
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hours
in this
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discipline
,
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so
I hope you will
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consider
my situation
favorably
.

Since our course consisted of classroom lessons and practice in the employment program, I had a choice of how to
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get
the
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required
minimum
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academic
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hours
to complete the
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discipline
. I was not
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able
to
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get
all the
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required
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academic
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hours
in
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class
due to illness and it
was planned
that I would be
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able
to recruit them in
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summer
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work
,
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but
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now
this has become impossible.
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So
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now
I am in a
rather
alarming position.

Therefore
, I ask you, maybe you will
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consider
the possibility of obtaining
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additional
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academic
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hours
with
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some
alternative
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ways
?
For example
, completing
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additional
written
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work
or attending extra classes.

I am looking forward to your confirmation. Thanking you in
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advance


Kind regards,

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Albina
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Urubkina
,

can be a serious obstacle for me on the
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way
to achieving the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
discipline
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I hope you will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consider
my situation
favorably
.

Since our course consisted of classroom lessons and practice in the employment program, I had a choice of how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
minimum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
discipline
. I was not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
all the
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required
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academic
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hours
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
due to illness and it
was planned
that I would be
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able
to recruit them in
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summer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
now
this has become impossible.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
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now
I am in a
rather
alarming position.

Therefore
, I ask you, maybe you will
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consider
the possibility of obtaining
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additional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
alternative
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ways
?
For example
, completing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
additional
written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
or attending extra classes.

I am looking forward to your confirmation. Thanking you in
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
advance


Kind regards,

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Albina
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Urubkina
,
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IELTS letter The cancellation of this program

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