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Dear Developers, I am a player of "Cookie Run: Kingdom" which belongs to your development company. This morning between 7: 50 am and 8: 00 am (my time zone is GMT + 7 ), we got an "unstable connection" error several times, then we were logged out of our accounts. My friends, fortunately, were able to log in with their credentials and were successful. But when I try to log in with my gmail, it is "deadlinenhieuqua@gmail. com" as far as I remember, it seems to be playing from the beginning again, all the data in my account seems to be no longer in the phone. Hope the developers can help me with this problem? My account is "ParkSoju", on the server "Holly Berry". Best regards p/s: my english is not very good, but i hope the developers can help
Dear Developers,

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Cookie Run: Kingdom
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which belongs to your development
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company
. This morning between 7: 50 am and 8: 00 am (my time zone is GMT + 7
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, we
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got
an
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unstable connection
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error several times, then we
were logged
out of our accounts. My friends,
fortunately
, were able to log in with their credentials and were successful.
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when I try to log in with my
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gmail
, it is
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deadlinenhieuqua@gmail
.
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com
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as far as I remember, it seems to be playing from the beginning again, all the data in my account seems to be no longer in the phone.

Hope the developers can
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help
me with this problem? My account is
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ParkSoju
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, on the server
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Holly Berry
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.

Best regards

p/s: my
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english
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,
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IELTS letter complain about something to developers

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  American English
5 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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