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Heating system is inadequate

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Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to complain about the heating system installed in the room (no: 116). I stayed in that room last weekend and the stay there ws very difficult as the heating system was not functioning well. Let me explain the issues in detail. Though there's was digital dispaly to control the temparature but the temparature didn't change according to the controller. When I informed the situation to the staff they said, they will attend to the issue as much as possible. However until I left the hotel the issue was not fixed. And I had to wear many cloths and get my self covered in the balnket through out the night as I'm not familiar to the cold weather. Considering this bad experience, I would like to ask for a partial refund as I had a very difficult stay in your hotel. And the amount I paid is not deserve for such kind of bad stay. Yours faithfully, Isuru
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to complain about the heating system installed in the room (no: 116). I stayed in that room last weekend and the stay there
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difficult as the heating system was not functioning well.
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the issues in detail. Though
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digital
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to control the
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temparature
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according to the controller. When I informed the situation to the staff they said, they will attend to the issue as much as possible.
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However
until I
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left
the hotel the issue was not
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fixed
. And I had to wear
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many
cloths and
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get
my self covered in the
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balnket
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through out
the night as I'm not familiar to the
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cold
weather. Considering this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
experience, I would like to
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ask for
a partial refund as I had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult stay in your hotel. And the amount I paid is not
Consider using a past participle here: "deserved".
deserve
for such kind of
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stay. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Isuru
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IELTS letter Heating system is inadequate

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  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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