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Heating system is inadequate

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Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to complain about the heating system installed in the room (no: 116). I stayed in that room last weekend and the stay there ws very difficult as the heating system was not functioning well. Let me explain the issues in detail. Though there's was digital dispaly to control the temparature but the temparature didn't change according to the controller. When I informed the situation to the staff they said, they will attend to the issue as much as possible. However until I left the hotel the issue was not fixed. And I had to wear many cloths and get my self covered in the balnket through out the night as I'm not familiar to the cold weather. Considering this bad experience, I would like to ask for a partial refund as I had a very difficult stay in your hotel. And the amount I paid is not deserve for such kind of bad stay. Yours faithfully, Isuru
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to complain about the heating system installed in the room (no: 116). I stayed in that room last weekend and the stay there
ws
very
difficult as the heating system was not functioning well.
Let
me
explain
the issues in detail. Though
there's was
digital
dispaly
to control the
temparature
but
the
temparature
didn't
change
according to the controller. When I informed the situation to the staff they said, they will attend to the issue as much as possible.
However
until I
left
the hotel the issue was not
fixed
. And I had to wear
many
cloths and
get
my self covered in the
balnket
through out
the night as I'm not familiar to the
cold
weather. Considering this
bad
experience, I would like to
ask for
a partial refund as I had a
very
difficult stay in your hotel. And the amount I paid is not
deserve
for such kind of
bad
stay. Yours
faithfully
,
Isuru

IELTS letter Heating system is inadequate

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
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