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Dear Mr. Adam Jane, I am writing this letter to demand a short break from my teaching courses in your institute. In the last few days, I was not comfortable while I was teaching. I think that I am under pressure since my wedding will be in the next 20 days as I informed you in our last meeting. Therefore, the arrangement should be taken soon such as cards invitations. Moreover, I have been working without any vacation for almost a year which may affect my performance in the class. I would like to ask you for extra 10 days due to my family have booked a covered holiday in Tunisia just the day after my wedding. I would be most grateful if you could make them at the beginning of May. I talked with my colleague Mr. Walid Radj and he said that he would replace me during the Mondays that I teach the CA class. Furthermore, I have prepared for the student all the courses they need in this period. thank you for taking the time to look at my matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely,

Dear Mr. Adam Jane,

I am writing this letter to demand a short break from my teaching courses in your institute.

In the last few days, I was not comfortable while I was teaching. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that I am under pressure since my wedding will be in the next
 20 days as I informed you in our last meeting. Therefore
, the arrangement should be taken
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soon
 such as cards invitations. Moreover
, I have been working without any vacation for almost a year which may affect my performance in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

I would like to ask you for extra 10 days due to my family have booked a covered holiday in Tunisia This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 the day after my wedding. I would be most grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them at the beginning of May.

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Walid
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Radj and
 he said that he would replace me during the Mondays that I teach the CA This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. Furthermore
, I have prepared for the student all the courses they need in this period.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThank
thank
 you for taking the time to look at my matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
, 

IELTS letter ask for time off from a company

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

193 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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