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Dear Mr. Adam Jane, I am writing this letter to demand a short break from my teaching courses in your institute. In the last few days, I was not comfortable while I was teaching. I think that I am under pressure since my wedding will be in the next 20 days as I informed you in our last meeting. Therefore, the arrangement should be taken soon such as cards invitations. Moreover, I have been working without any vacation for almost a year which may affect my performance in the class. I would like to ask you for extra 10 days due to my family have booked a covered holiday in Tunisia just the day after my wedding. I would be most grateful if you could make them at the beginning of May. I talked with my colleague Mr. Walid Radj and he said that he would replace me during the Mondays that I teach the CA class. Furthermore, I have prepared for the student all the courses they need in this period. thank you for taking the time to look at my matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Mr. Adam Jane,

I am writing this letter to demand a short break from my teaching courses in your institute.

In the last few days, I was not comfortable while I was teaching. I
think
that I am under pressure since my wedding will be in the
next
20 days as I informed you in our last meeting.
Therefore
, the arrangement should
be taken
soon
such as cards invitations.
Moreover
, I have been working without any vacation for almost a year which may affect my performance in the
class
.

I would like to ask you for extra 10 days due to my family have booked a covered holiday in Tunisia
just
the day after my wedding. I would be most grateful if you could
make
them at the beginning of May.

I
talked with my colleague Mr.
Walid
Radj and
he said that he would replace me during the Mondays that I teach the CA
class
.
Furthermore
, I have prepared for the student all the courses they need in this period.

thank
you for taking the time to look at my matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter ask for time off from a company

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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