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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, LawG
Dear Sir or Madam, The letter is to highlight my recent credit card transactions that don't seem right to my account. In addition to that, these activities are on the list of expensive products. Let me first introduce myself. My name is William Nomad, and I am working as a Technical consultant at one of the leading retailers. I am with your esteem bank for more than 5+ years. Coming back to the issue - I am facing with the credit card transactions. I have seen recent transactions on my credit card that are expensive and very high with my average monthly credit card bill. These costly diamond necklaces cost $22, 000 from Diabana Jewelers; two bags cost $4, 599 and $7, 200, respectively, and shoes of $2, 800. I am confident these events are not correct. I like to propose some of the solutions to fix these transactions. Firstly, to make sure these transactions are not mistaken. Secondly, if these transactions are legit, make sure where transactions happened & collect additional information from the merchandise. Lastly, cancel these transactions and make sure these don't happen in the future. I hope these expensive transaction issues from the statement will be taken care of ASAP. Please find my attached statement as well. Best Regards, William Nomad
Dear Sir or Madam,

The letter is to highlight my recent
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transactions
that don't seem right to my account.
In addition
to that, these activities are on the list of expensive products.

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Let
me
first
introduce myself. My name is William Nomad, and I am working as a Technical consultant at one of the leading retailers. I am with your esteem bank for more than 5+ years.

Coming back to the issue
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I am facing with the
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credit
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card
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transactions
. I have
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transactions
on my
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card
that are expensive and
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high with my average monthly
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credit
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bill. These costly diamond necklaces cost $22, 000 from
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Diabana
Jewelers; two bags cost $4, 599 and $7, 200,
respectively
, and shoes of $2, 800.

I am confident these
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are not correct. I like to propose
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some of the
solutions to
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fix
these
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transactions
.
Firstly
, to
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make
sure these
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transactions
are not mistaken.
Secondly
, if these
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transactions
are legit,
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make
sure where
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transactions
happened & collect additional information from the merchandise.
Lastly
, cancel these
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transactions
and
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make
sure these don't happen in the future.

I hope these expensive
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transaction
issues from the statement will
be taken
care of ASAP.
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Please
find my attached statement
as well
.

Best Regards,

William Nomad
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IELTS letter You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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