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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , XLDE
Dear Mr. Singh, The purpose of my writing this letter is to express my dissatisfaction regarding the furniture in the apartment rented by you. I am aware that you live out of the city, because of which you are not able to able to maintain the apartment under your guidance. I have been living in your apartment for the last six months. My husband and my 14-month-old daughter live with me. Initially, I liked the apartment, especially the kitchen, the storage space is good, and we needed a fully-furnished place, which was the prime reason for my decision to move into this apartment. Let me explain the issue, the dining table is very old, so the chairs are filthy. I have tried to clean them but without any success. They are not good for usage. Moreover, the back-support of the bed in my guest room has got rusted screws. So the back support keeps falling off. It can be hazardous. I will share the pictures for more clarity. I have tried to fix things, but your intervention is necessary now. The dining table and the bed support need replacement. I request you to get it done asap. If you want, I can share the dimensions with you, such that you don't have to come down to look at it yourself. These things are of everyday usage so I cannot ignore them. It is not worth the risk. I hope you will understand and I look forward to your reply. Should you require any more details, do not hesitate to ask me. Yours Sincerely. Binny Arora.
Dear Mr. Singh,

The purpose of my writing this letter is to express my dissatisfaction regarding the furniture in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
rented by you. I am aware that you
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live
out of the city,
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because
of which you are not
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able to able to
maintain the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
under your guidance.

I have been living in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
for the last six months. My husband and my 14-month-
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old
daughter
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live
with me.
Initially
, I liked the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
,
especially
the kitchen, the storage space is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
, and we needed a
fully
-furnished place, which was the prime reason for my decision to
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move
into this apartment.

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Let
me
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explain
the issue, the dining table is
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very
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old
,
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so
the chairs are filthy. I have tried to clean them
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but
without any success. They are not
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good
for usage.
Moreover
, the back-support of the bed in my guest room has
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got
rusted screws.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the back support
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keeps
falling off. It can be hazardous. I will share the pictures for more clarity.

I have tried to
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fix
things,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
your intervention is necessary
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now
. The dining table and the bed support need replacement. I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it done asap. If you want, I can share the dimensions with you, such that you don't
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
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come
down to look at it yourself. These things are of everyday usage
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so
I cannot
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ignore
them. It is not worth the
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risk
.

I hope you will understand and I look forward to your reply. Should you require any more
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details
, do not hesitate to ask me.

Yours
Sincerely
.

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Binny
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Arora
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

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  American English
8 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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