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Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner

Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner p0Xd
Dear GrandmotherI hope you are doing well. I am really sorry to let you that I couldn't come to see you. My university has been started recently and I am busy with going to classes. My teacher have assigned social project to distribute 100 blankets to street staying people as weather is freezing here. I will be getting good score in final exam if I complete the project as soon as by next week. So I have occupied with this work along with my classmates. However my university getting off by next month so I planned that this time I'd to stay a month at our home town. Also I wonder, mom and dad would plan a surprise for my birthday which is on next month end. I am disparately waiting for the next month to come and see you and our family. your lovinglyAarthi
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GrandmotherI
hope you are doing well. I am
really
sorry to
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let
you that I couldn't
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come
to
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see
you.

My university has been
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started
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recently and
I am busy with going to classes. My teacher have assigned social project to distribute 100 blankets to street staying
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people
as weather is freezing here. I will be getting
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good
score in final exam if I complete the project as
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soon
as by
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next
week.
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So
I have occupied with this work along with my classmates.
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However
my university getting off by
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next
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month
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so
I planned that this time I'd to stay a
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month
at our home town.
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Also
I wonder, mom and dad would plan a surprise for my birthday which is on
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next
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month
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end
. I am
disparately
waiting for the
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next
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month
to
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come
and
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see
you and our family.

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your
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lovinglyAarthi

IELTS letter Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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