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You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence

You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence 9dr3
Dear Ms. Snyder, I am writing in regard to get approval for my vacation plan for next month. First of all, I am delighted to announce that my elder brother's marriage is fixed and is going to be held on 23rd April, 2021. This is a destination wedding in Bali, Indonesia has been booked. Therefore, I would need your official approval in the system on my leaves. My vacation plan dates will be from the 19th to the 25th of April. I will resume office on 27th April in my normal shift. My flights are booked from my hometown (Hyderabad) to Bali along with my family members for 20th April and hence, it is critical to reaching my hometown by 19th. Since I will be out of the office for a week and very soon our team is going to have a new project, I would assign someone to shadow my work for the duration. I have talked to Salim in our team who has the bandwidth to replace me in my absence. My KT plan is already shared ensuring every aspect would be well-communicated to him. I anticipate a positive response to my request. Sincerely, Sweta Suman
Dear Ms. Snyder,

I am writing in regard to
get
approval for my vacation plan for
next
month.

First of all
, I
am delighted
to announce that my elder brother's marriage is
fixed
and is going to
be held
on 23rd
April, 2021
. This is a destination wedding in Bali, Indonesia has
been booked
.
Therefore
, I would need your official approval in the system on my
leaves
.

My vacation plan dates will be from the 19th to the 25th of April. I will resume office on 27th April in my normal shift. My flights
are booked
from my hometown (Hyderabad) to Bali along with my family members for 20th April and
hence
, it is critical to
reaching
my hometown by 19th.

Since I will be out of the office for a week and
very
soon
our team is going to have a new project, I would assign someone to shadow my work for the duration. I have talked to
Salim
in our team who has the bandwidth to replace me in my absence. My KT plan is already shared ensuring every aspect would be well-communicated to him.

I anticipate a
positive
response to my request.

Sincerely
,

Sweta
Suman
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IELTS letter You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence

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  American English
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6.0
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