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A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. you would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to principal of college Explain what would you like to talk Why students should be interested in your job Suggest a possible date and time.

A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. you would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to principal of college Explain what would you like to talk Why students should be interested in your job Suggest a possible date and time. mabr
Dear sir I am writing this letter in respond to your advertisement that was published in yesterday new-paper in which you invite local individual to communicate with students. Firstly, I appreciate to your this step as it helps to reduce the generation gap and give some enlightens to youngsters about difficulties. I would like to interact with pupils because, I wants to provide them information about future scope of commerce stream as I started my business after completion of master of business management. Numerous students have mindset that only medical and non- medical streams involves major subjects by studying those subjects they can get job easily. However, I would like to highlight my experience and difficulties that I faced while choosing stream and advantage of commerce subjects. I usually busy in my business meeting but I cancelled my all meeting next Monday so, i can come that day any time. I hope you will give me chance communicate with students. Yours faithfully, John
Dear sir

I am writing this letter in respond to your advertisement that
was published
in yesterday new-paper in which you invite local individual to communicate with students.
Firstly
, I appreciate to your this step as it
helps
to
reduce
the generation gap and give
some
enlightens to youngsters about difficulties.

I would like to interact with pupils
because
, I
wants
to provide them information about future scope of commerce stream as I
started
my business after completion of master of business management. Numerous students have mindset that
only
medical and non- medical streams involves major subjects by studying those subjects they can
get
job
easily
.
However
, I would like to highlight my experience and difficulties that I faced while choosing stream and advantage of commerce subjects.

I
usually
busy in my business meeting
but
I cancelled my all meeting
next
Monday
so
,
i
can
come
that day any time.

I hope you will give me chance communicate with students.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
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IELTS letter A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. you would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to principal of college Explain what would you like to talk Why students should be interested in your job Suggest a possible date and time.

Letter
  American English
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162 words
6.0
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