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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In your letter, Introduce yourself. Explain that you did not buy the items listed and Say what you would like the bank to fix the problem. You should write at least 150 words

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In your letter, Introduce yourself. Explain that you did not buy the items listed and Say what you would like the bank to fix the problem. qGkG
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter highlights my recent credit card transactions that don't seem right to my account. In expanding to that, these activities are on the list of expensive products. Let me introduce myself. My name is William Nomad, and I am working as a Technical consultant at one of the leading retailers. I am with your esteem bank for more than 5+ years. Coming back to the issue — I faced with the credit card transactions. I have seen recent transactions on my credit card that are expensive and high compared to my average monthly credit card bill. These costly diamond necklaces cost $22000 from Dianna Jewelers; two bags cost $4599 and $7200, and shoes of $2800. I am confident these events are not correct. I like to propose some solutions to fix these transactions. First, to confirm these transactions are not mistaken. Further, if these transactions are legit, validate where transactions happened & collect additional information from the merchandise. Finally, cancel these transactions and reinforce these don't happen in the future. I hope these expensive transactions from the statement will resolve ASAP. Please find my attached account. Best Regards, William Nomad
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter highlights my recent
credit
card
transactions
that don't seem right to my account. In expanding to that, these activities are on the list of expensive products.

Let
me introduce myself. My name is William Nomad, and I am working as a Technical consultant at one of the leading retailers. I am with your esteem bank for more than 5+ years.

Coming back to the issue — I faced with the
credit
card
transactions
. I have
seen
recent
transactions
on my
credit
card
that are expensive and high compared to my average monthly
credit
card
bill. These costly diamond necklaces cost $22000 from Dianna Jewelers; two bags cost $4599 and $7200, and shoes of $2800.

I am confident these
events
are not correct. I like to propose
some
solutions to
fix
these
transactions
.
First
, to confirm these
transactions
are not mistaken.
Further
, if these
transactions
are legit, validate where
transactions
happened & collect additional information from the merchandise.
Finally
, cancel these
transactions
and reinforce these don't happen in the future.

I hope these expensive
transactions
from the statement will resolve ASAP.
Please
find my attached account.

Best Regards,

William Nomad
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IELTS letter You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In your letter, Introduce yourself. Explain that you did not buy the items listed and Say what you would like the bank to fix the problem.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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