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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays A6PL
Dear Mr. John, Hope you are doing good? I am wiriting this letter to inform you regarding the party we have been planning to have in our garden the next weekend. Last month, I have completed my college degree in the Toronto University. My parents have planned to celebrate my graduation by having a party with close friends and family members. Moreover, around 25 members are expected to attend the event on next Sunday evening. we have arranged for some music events after the dinner, consequently, it perhaps can extend till late night. I would like to extend my sincere apologies in advance incase if we are disturbing. We will make sure to keep the noise to minimal. I would really appreciate if you could make your prescence in the party and shower your blessings. Hoping to meet you in person soon. Yours Sincerely, Casey
Dear Mr. John,

Hope you are doing
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good
? I am
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wiriting
this letter to inform you regarding the party we have been planning to have in our garden the
next
weekend.

Last month, I have completed my college degree in the Toronto University. My parents have planned to celebrate my graduation by having a party with close friends and family members.
Moreover
, around 25 members are
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expected
to attend the
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event
on
next
Sunday evening.

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we
have arranged for
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some
music
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events
after the dinner,
consequently
, it perhaps can extend till late night. I would like to extend my sincere apologies in advance
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incase
if we are disturbing. We will
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make
sure to
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keep
the noise to minimal.

I would
really
appreciate if you could
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make
your
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prescence
in the party and shower your blessings. Hoping to
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meet
you in person
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soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Casey

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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