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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation lDXo

Dear Sir or Madam, The latest edition of your travel magazine includes an article about my hometown, I found some information is incorrect. The writer described the harbour railway station which is near to my home as the oldest train station in the town, but this is false information. This is the third oldest train terminal in my town, and it was constructed in 1976. As your magazine, is one of the prestigious magazines with tens of thousands of readers and has an international reputation which influences people across the world, it is essential that any content published should be accurate and reliable. This is because the majority of readers use it as reference material for exam preparation. I feel that in order to correct the given information you should publish another article in your next edition with an apology letter to your subscribers. I would urge you to ensure that all factual information should be thoroughly checked prior to publication. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir or Madam,

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