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You have some documents that you need to be translated into another language as soon as possible. Write a letter to a translation agency. In your letter

You have some documents that you need to be translated into another language as soon as possible. Write a letter to a translation agency. In your letter nkxn
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I want to translate tourist visa documents from Dutch to English. I hope you are doing specially for other country people who is staying in Europe. Let me clear out my situation. I have applied for tourist visa for my mother who is in India. Visa processing was started on last week and have requested to submit all visa relevant documents. However, all the documents were in Dutch language as I applied from Europe. As such, I haven't not been able to read the Dutch. Would you kindly translate all the documents from Dutch to English as soon as possible, which is shared to you already. So that I can submit to visa center to speed up the process. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Aar
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I want to translate tourist visa
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
from Dutch to English. I hope you are doing
specially
for other country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
Did you mean "am", "are", "aren"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.
is
staying in Europe.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
out my situation. I have applied for tourist visa for my mother who is in India. Visa processing was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
on last week and have requested to submit all visa relevant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
.
However
, all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
were in Dutch language as I applied from Europe. As such, I
You used a negation after a negated contracted verb. Did you mean simply "haven't"?
haven't not
been able to read the Dutch.

Would you kindly translate all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
from Dutch to English as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible, which
is shared
to you already.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
I can submit to visa center to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
speed up
the process.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Aar

IELTS letter You have some documents that you need to be translated into another language as soon as possible. Write a letter to a translation agency. In your letter

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  American English
5 paragraphs
138 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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