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You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.

You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. kajR
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the tennis course advertisement which you advertised recently in England centeral newspaper. I am extremely interested in this course but I do have few concerns with regard to the timings. Tennis is one of my favourite sports and I immensely enjoy playing it the most and have been practicing it from last 6 months. Playing tennis is like a stress buster for me and it helps me in keeping my body calm, fit and active. However, when it comes to my game, I feel like there is still room for improvement. I am currentely on my spring break and have to fly back to my college sometime in July. Since this course is planned for two months, I wanted to check with you if in case I have to fly back to my college in middle of this course, would it be possible to get the refund for the remaining days? I really hope that you will be able to understand my concern and would provide some solution around the same. I look forward to your favorable response. Yours Sincerely, Adam
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the tennis
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course
advertisement which you advertised recently in England
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centeral
newspaper. I am
extremely
interested in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
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but
I do have few concerns with regard to the timings.

Tennis is one of my
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favourite
sports and I
immensely
enjoy playing it the most and have been practicing it from last 6 months. Playing tennis is like a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
buster for me and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me in keeping my body calm, fit and active.
However
, when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to my game, I feel like there is
still
room for improvement.

I am
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currentely
on my spring break and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
fly
back to my college sometime in July. Since this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is planned
for two months, I wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
with you if in case I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
fly
back to my college in middle of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, would it be possible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the refund for the remaining days? I
really
hope that you will be able to understand my concern and would provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
solution around the same.

I look forward to your favorable response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Adam

IELTS letter You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
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