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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take ma3O
Dear Mr. Smith I hope you will be in the best of your health. I recieved your letter about the loud noise you have been hearing lately coming from my house. As you know my elderly mother is not well and cannot access the upper floor. I hired a contractor to build a ramp beside the staircase to install the automatic lift chair for her to access the upper floor. As of now the progress is ahead of schedule. I duly understand the situation you have been facing and the inconvenience caused from the on-going work at my house. Please accept my sincere apologies. As a law abiding citizen it is my civic duty to take care of any problems my neighbours face. Please be assured that i have mentioned your concerns to the contractor and also informed him about your work timings. From Monday he will be working at earliar hours of the day and will complete the day's work before your arrival at home. Thanks and Best Regards Tony
Dear Mr. Smith

I hope you will be in the best of your health. I
Possible spelling mistake found.
recieved
your letter about the loud noise you have been hearing lately coming from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. As you know my elderly mother is not well and cannot access the upper floor. I hired a contractor to build a ramp beside the staircase to install the automatic lift chair for her to access the upper floor. As of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
the progress is ahead of schedule.

I
duly
understand the situation you have been facing and the inconvenience caused from the
Did you mean "ongoing"?
on-going
work at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my sincere apologies.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
law abiding
citizen it is my civic duty to take care of any problems my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.
neighbours
face.

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Please
be assured
that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have mentioned your concerns to the contractor and
also
informed him about your work timings. From
The comma is probably missing here: "Monday, he".
Monday he
will be working at
Possible spelling mistake found.
earliar
hours of the day and will complete the day's work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
your arrival at home.

Thanks and Best Regards

Tony

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.