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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect

Dear Sir, Hope this mail finds you in best of your mood and health. My name is Ashley, and I reside in Delhi. I am a regular reader of your magazine since I was 20 years old, as you states most interesting actual and reliable facts about the places, which I find most interesting. In the recent past week article dated Jan, Page2, Article # 44 for one of the Place in Delhi called Karol Bagh. From Past 30+ years, I am living in Delhi and have seen all the narrow-broad roads of the city. In the article it was mentioned that the Karol Bagh is located in the Northwest of Delhi however actually it is situated in the Central Delhi. As, many travelers like me do rely on your editions while travelling and use the information provided inside. Being an honest citizen and a follower of your magazine, I find that its my duty to share this information with you and indirectly help other through your magazine with right information provide. I request you to please re-publish the article with the correct information in your upcoming edition. Thank You

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